oh. I thought it was done the last time around. That's why i told you to continue.
Bang up job.

yeah well i did too.. i was a bit unsure of what i was doing with it.. i tougth about it and i dicided to work on it more.. i met with the editor and he helped me figure something out and ffocus my ideas... im not very good at making comics... i was only ever an illustrator doing single images... its hard to tell a story using panels like this.

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it's been a bit since you've loaded work up I really like this one more so than the last

well man it's all lookin dope yo ! can't wait so see what happens next man...

i really love the way you put everything together... the composition within each panel....

there's only one thing i dont get...

so like the first small panel with the dude in it... he looks away from his drawing board yeah? then on the next panel he has a pencil in his hand and he's painting again... and then all of the sudden he stands near his bed...

you get what i mean?

maybe it works better if ya put the pic where he looks away from the drawing board after tha panel of him drawing...

haha yo i'm not saying i could do it better or anything... it was just something i noticed ya know...

lookin good anyways mang keep it up yo !

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woooooow this is awesome, a surreal beaston comic about the art itself... dude well done

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whatever you want it to be

DAMMMMN SO GOOOOD

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suh-weet!

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This is good, n merry xmas!

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